Saturday, August 23, 2008

A bLASt fRoM tHE pAST.....~!

HE-SHE?!!

He asks her if she can…

She says that she can…

He asks her to wash his clothes…

She does it with all heart...

He treats her like a fly…

She just gives him a chance to try..!

He speaks ill of her...

She takes it all into her...

He keeps reminding her of being an intruder…

She keeps fighting back with frozen tears…

He asks her to clean his shoes…

She does it without any woes…

He brings a girl into the house..

She responds like a mouse…

He suddenly decides to disown her...

She ,this time..,pleads to him to have her…

He sways from here to there…

Like a bird caught between two branches…

From the girl to her…

Not knowing to whom to hear…

He then makes a decision…

He holds her neck with disgust…

She struggles and starts to protest…

He shoves her out of the house…

She falls on the pavement…

She gets up…with her face filled with shock…

She takes one last look at him…

Their eyes meet…

Tears flow…

She utters a last word of prayer…

“GOD…PLEASE FORGIVE MY SON!!!~~!!”


- !~!somsie~!~!


P.S. :

A poem written when I was in Class XI...Just a reminiscence. Memories, never fade away.........~~~!~!~!



6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Beautifully written.

Beautiful work like this from all quarters, I'm sure will make a world beautiful place to live in.

s()ms!e said...

Thank You Naveen :-) :-)

Anonymous said...

Hey ,why are you smiling/laughing(smile icons in your response)???

s()ms!e said...

Why shouldn't I...? I thought it was a Democratic NATION...And what's with a smiley!>?! :| (there goes one again) :P

Ice-Thorn said...

awesome is not the word!! touched my heart the very 1st time i read it.I love this poem!
you knw that piece of writin u absolutely MUST include in the 1st book u publish???
add this one as well!

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